it begins with a droning noise to summon me forward,

wheels locked into place, windows closed,

the dreaded swish, swish begins

eyes shut tight, knuckles clenched so hard they turn white,

slick, blue tendrils spin and slap against my fortress,

in a vicious, soapy barrage, over and over

I pray for the torment to end as water cascades, and a fierce fale howls,

but I emerge, fully restored, refreshed , yet pulse pounding,

if only I weren’t so afraid of car washes.

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    Anonymous

    neat story. I went thru the car wash on Sunday on my way to church. When I left churcc there were two large bird visits on the car

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    1. Allie Frost Avatar

      I mustered up the courage to go last weekend and it rained that night, so it was all for naught 😩

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